【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
1 M" t$ ~; G8 W$ M9 r, e" f# txxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
* g) U. @0 i* N2 R: d皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( v' V* K  `: x" ^- q夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, v6 R4 L  i# [: m凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 K/ q( ~0 L) ?1 g/ n' M6 j月光闪烁 在我眼中
3 d% }$ h+ `, O+ qThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 s" q* C3 x& X4 d4 ]一片丹心 照耀夜空
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! `. L4 ?0 D( I+ UWith the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
1 T) L" u' Y, d$ g9 n4 uSeeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
+ v+ k& E% O1 C: Q( CIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
  S! V1 A" M& @0 S1 D& c9 f9 O; eYou needn’t fear anything
* a( b1 X: s. s8 J$ Y怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
8 U1 l4 {2 ~* }: _I really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
  m7 k/ U. v& j爱你爱你 全心全意
& \% W4 K& a. k8 E) ]; ~5 hNothing can compare to my love
; N' b8 I4 G7 K& ^2 o9 i' j世间万物  皆不能比

0 [* m& j6 m0 j5 n; M* bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
7 L" |9 `/ c: J6 S) t1 [9 c# FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
1 S' m8 X' C5 A" rI invite you to rip it out
( e# a- i9 S3 a9 y你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
* K1 _& M+ j- |* O5 N0 sI’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
4 M) n. l! k! J! E" M* }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
* w5 ~; w, u! U真恨不能 以死明志
6 t; @  _$ k2 S! J- P: ?I only have one tongue
0 @+ v5 T9 f. l' ~! s7 ~我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 z; m" C5 T/ ]! l/ r- Z9 m& {也恨不得  多如千万
# ^) v4 L. Q/ a5 Z/ F9 f+ s0 Y; MWith such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
; c$ B" z' |1 L4 f2 ?7 FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 A0 x2 D; |( u能说会道 无以伦比
- N2 Z4 P6 e) I6 tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
, o3 b" `8 u0 p, I8 H8 BRambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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* h$ S% Q2 E% G  ^9 N/ I- \The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! E% ^1 C+ B2 m' i! Z* g从未向你吐露衷情
9 X7 L5 @: _# n  vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 @2 V& @/ L  A9 |爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
* m2 E3 b% I+ d  h对你一见倾心
- j  G- A# S/ w7 a7 v) ]I already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
: B, z: v* P- m你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# o" ]) L' C4 \7 p0 P4 t奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 p4 D  f# D: D4 a7 F( F; w/ i若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
9 }3 n4 j" V0 E3 `" y& j% II would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
) t7 g$ H* j: w/ ]/ SLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
  x& E4 u: [: h! ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
6 ]# a- J4 n% J7 B4 z8 {4 u为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
' h' V) E& E3 O' C/ SBut I never did
; F6 C+ u4 y% A& n9 N1 |却始终未曾出口
: n" J6 m4 L3 s" [# b  lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) w# T+ k9 E6 |. x今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
9 d! m/ N2 a: p. p3 VEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

) I4 J, [2 }$ pLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 l9 n1 m  C6 }& F5 U为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
; h( F6 ?, `! |  v9 G4 u& K4 TBut I never did
  I# H. W( m' o/ N1 A; ~) Y) _却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 }5 y# w; `7 L5 K0 b只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
' `3 M  K# k# R+ oIf today isn’t too late,
- I% U" d+ w. G1 X+ _2 n假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' n7 T$ |3 d8 O7 ?6 f! H今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
4 @3 x2 y( g7 G1 ~% K; \7 R- k7 tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) F7 n# J9 l; p  t/ H不愿这份爱 逝如流水
4 u; ?. m" F% B0 [Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
, h$ {# f7 D) |( a# ZEntrust my love within your heart
* n, _' }5 p4 O; S. X从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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. h8 M% K+ k9 n9 z. K2 TCan I entrust it to you?
9 B$ D4 r. X- G: B. ]0 b可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
) W# y! V" f( F老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
: \8 q' C0 a8 |6 X7 q% v4 ~' G老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
$ y- G7 S; t. l( X. s: y' M刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

0 l! K  U4 o; T# m; s不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。