【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( v- S1 {! {1 w4 {' Y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ t! l" `; D& Q( i3 N+ sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& T2 V/ L: R7 t& B9 L1 T, i# d7 x7 e& @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. W7 H4 N; k7 r! r* W/ HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ g' m' \& q( E, x( v2 J- g( hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 g1 Y2 W& W! LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& h2 X7 G1 k2 H" ^4 T4 PI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 ^6 {# \* X5 W2 g, B' wI want so much to see inside your heart
/ g& k2 N) U4 D5 ?2 [( }" m& ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: O- k3 [6 |& A  \, ^1 }+ i0 _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& `* G8 `. H; x3 GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# m+ g& m, ^! c& s4 u, ?9 i+ d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 C* w) F4 W/ U' i4 _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  q- m1 {; q2 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 v. l- K1 H: ^# @  u' x5 R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 q8 k' X0 s7 x7 ^4 Z: r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* E- j/ K" D0 ]0 l! T. c, J! R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: c! t9 L8 C5 g: X% a% s. @$ p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 Y% R' S+ S( `) g# [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 L( o8 D& r! I- F  D$ g/ Y) S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 x% K+ k7 n4 {; f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! ~" h: @: z8 r: a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 h+ r: w& f$ A3 a0 u3 f9 g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; p- q, W0 _; X' `& e  D5 c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ o" A5 Z4 T3 \- [5 g/ R( g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 r1 K5 r/ p2 X" ~' w# H: _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: T; w/ R# |$ h; L5 E; x* n4 V  U/ I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. Y- d) Q$ Q0 z) D' h- h" H' d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 e! F) `5 J; F' e: _/ }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ @* W/ [5 T6 ]9 o; ~/ P: ~" K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 g" p) ?! x2 E! S% F/ x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 U2 ?9 v! y. A. j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( P  S  K& Q( x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 K5 H6 e( s+ D, q& i; z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  o3 j/ a6 U" Q- t9 B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- q) S; q: X! z: @. L8 u% w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. L% r. [) B2 S$ ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 W: g" |( R, B9 R5 [( [! I" w! T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 Z4 u/ q+ N3 ~* O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 d' V  t1 m) [, o2 h) p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* ~/ c+ j+ ]- h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% L6 V+ r$ ^& i4 ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. Z, T: z% w6 T$ Y& h; G我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; `1 G9 X" Q  t* k9 C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>