【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 F( g2 p3 C# v2 T7 J% {' [, |2 w歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; C4 R) _5 s; m' FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# v  W% n- c! A* J3 P9 s( E5 xWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# ]2 ?, B- H- t6 V% `3 s% ^9 V4 R! hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ ?8 Z" l, K9 g' iYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 m" z; `6 V/ r) Q6 u" FI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# H" ^9 ]% f) P( _1 P& e' n& h4 HNothing can compare to my love
/ m# ~5 Y2 }1 t; LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! c) h$ h! v0 C$ AI want so much to see inside your heart
0 ^3 b1 H6 b  d# kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 P( h# n( f# w6 B: Z( m: o2 jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 u+ X/ F+ i+ a% Q/ PI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- b8 p- W$ c) OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 G3 F) U5 ?9 S" w; c5 {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% B# b5 h( p6 V( R- A: L% e: F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ h- \4 E. q6 N) U. H5 P8 m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) z7 Q. f+ Y% C3 b1 q1 E) C, p2 ?2 x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( s# [0 n8 W  b  h2 i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, c, [7 J3 q8 V# v4 f0 S6 g, N9 |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# M1 n' Q% Z/ L1 r! F7 D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, ~: W! x# F; n4 q5 o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 F9 ]) d4 \3 y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) n, Y( E. j& q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) r8 F0 H  L6 N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 Y+ l4 n2 ~( g) X, S9 l) s3 E8 M6 Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ M5 T3 R6 F) b+ C. {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* ~$ Y. E5 s. y. _1 q# ~+ i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. ?) g& v- w, u: P) F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ ^" Q6 A9 y6 a$ B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 n6 _6 w) c9 t5 J8 o, ^& D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 H; k7 M. R5 l" K) m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 R( F& Y1 w$ W5 p$ A2 N9 A! }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( \# L+ \  }" r7 c/ T3 |6 @2 @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" T, N: Q0 X* j. b% h) M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 E+ e: |3 Q+ F  C( P; w( y1 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 q; p, ?! d4 |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  ~; d0 j$ _* ~+ N% ?3 a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, y- W% e! p  m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  i: U( B2 N8 H! N. p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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. k9 c' @1 I9 I. [! k) }! `1 R# p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>