【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) y% d' F; I4 |" A  {  cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 j* y& H' L4 r- E0 bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 L; ]6 Y6 }- X, i7 ]  @& J* X- dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( o! h' a# K3 F! IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 ?4 O# O9 {0 M7 y5 e: USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( l/ i: J& W9 u/ F+ ]You needn’t fear anything
. l, Y5 V1 A: @" |+ I1 iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 s* U9 `) k) D5 D6 l* KEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. [' x: n8 q; G0 |+ aI love you I love you with all my heart
6 D0 P1 P$ _; @+ L1 YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. C$ G3 y8 e" `; T- l2 h, uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- \# K8 d' I; b1 B  Q9 Q! P, e4 L  WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 ~$ s: t3 d5 P4 t1 }I’m still filled with fear
6 }; {; a6 m- D8 EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) s& z& k3 u9 ]. o9 P6 [- xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 g" J( }% [# p6 L6 y& j/ O1 Z; w$ NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' q& U3 ?: T' @) b' w; P& _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 ^3 X/ n) j8 O: P3 Z; i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 i( j: O- J: |  I( W+ J1 W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 P" i/ j( R4 M5 ~' v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 Q9 m' y7 V- Q: ~; q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 l7 y+ N8 d2 K2 p/ {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% O; M5 }# K; k! X' b' N6 Z5 t) s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& z. T: U5 Z* U5 f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% U9 s  l1 x2 ?" K5 R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 X# n8 w5 J% i3 [: A4 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! t. r; e6 `. F$ }6 p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 V6 b) w- V0 `. U$ D4 `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ q. r. ]: V  U. {7 T6 Y! t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% m/ W% ~- x% a/ t/ W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 _3 |+ `4 k. |& J6 O  |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 q4 h7 r- S% N% Q2 G5 W& n2 {4 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& j" f. H4 ^7 B; t. O: A2 G( M( `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. y+ J5 `3 s4 ^" @& [- I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( E" a* C( t: B$ ]9 W: V& i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% ?2 i+ ?  I( i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" {* |& `6 v( a* n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& r* K7 j2 m: C- D" s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 j5 [+ G2 u1 T8 u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ s: n/ K% n' s! r, k$ Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ j2 n3 l2 M/ ?1 v$ b1 {; k" p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 s  z, L# t0 h. x3 T6 n1 K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# s' N: O7 p  V6 `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 E0 [" t8 U8 C8 q9 q) A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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: E* y/ e" J! R' K7 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# S$ c; ]/ k% J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>