【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) _3 P6 v1 ^( t, N  o! N8 v6 lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ f( `9 q. l6 F2 D& j6 H! CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# G$ O- V3 t* @( y2 e0 W) R! TThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 ]" E6 s/ l; D3 E6 o# i5 I# tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: ?6 J: t' J" J4 g( y$ {! @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 z& u' P+ S9 o  I- o* _/ bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& M8 u/ D& y# r, L/ y- C% q: z0 @9 {I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' d; v4 J5 X" |) p% ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 f! _" e6 F$ q7 g2 _% L2 }I regret not dying
) R7 T, T0 ^, e6 a6 rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: ~' F3 w6 `/ |0 SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, E# V& [/ a8 U6 p0 U+ Q+ A2 GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ Y% X0 E2 ]# j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" ]5 f% G: W: r8 k' V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& J8 ^3 F- r4 o/ \% I% @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 I8 h+ x% Y6 M  u' Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) C4 l, a% o/ ?8 P, X0 q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  B3 d! a$ G/ }# a' t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' B% l! \# U, O5 l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# z+ m1 _. y$ T& T4 X/ Z/ ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# k) c' E4 {9 f2 y7 H+ B; G( j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# B9 p+ P7 o( U! N- x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* q, s  o- s( |* ?" S3 d$ P3 F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ C# t6 w4 c) n- U5 A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 D1 S: ]& T2 ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 \. a% C3 w$ y1 ^, p4 [<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( [; i7 B: p3 l* l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# R: Y! m) w+ `0 l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& v6 T& w; ~7 ?  z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& [( D% S8 G+ C( o. c2 Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) I/ `! P2 F! d: P  o- u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 z- u4 o. v( [/ X  ~; |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' n3 z' Z  d8 _4 F8 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ T, Y* e4 @- T. S# S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. g. B/ x* V3 v5 H0 b. O  g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 r6 \+ j2 k6 ~4 o% q: y! L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# i) f, {4 p: p$ l4 ?, t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ ~3 _6 f  g- A7 A  h+ U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% }* ]% |, Q8 v/ [9 H" N我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; j7 f& \. q3 }! B4 c+ h' J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>