【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ G! [7 c) D, PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 U4 ]% j6 Y/ o( m4 E6 i1 a) lThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ |# L% n( ~1 \( FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. m, M% x, d* B6 H/ r/ X/ yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) {, h8 V; \" |You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- ]7 X  j# u. Q7 Z. hI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 N5 l$ R: q% T2 X. B1 s8 XNothing can compare to my love
2 ], B. f9 T7 ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' b7 c4 M* k! ~2 C, W* X' }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 M+ b- u& t- KI want so much to see inside your heart
! @0 ^' C- ]7 _4 R+ ^* C$ x8 |1 r! iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 m/ ]/ P* v. x, K* WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 q* T, t# k" C/ g! `) cI regret not dying
- N/ J; v8 h3 \9 Z. r3 E: _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ y5 E" n- v) [3 [; C. ~) CWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 d3 }( w# C" jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ `9 w2 t- H* e0 m! x( G! p+ L! n' G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# s' ]$ v: }, J1 f# L) k7 x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: {, |9 h7 c( d# ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. |5 f! _3 S, k6 W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ ]1 p, z+ r% `5 R' w$ h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 c3 I, i; V* Z. Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, s  r3 G: R5 x7 o' ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# x0 K% a% v3 Y5 i6 J# @% n6 t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 g8 Q8 w/ ?' g" ~( z, q2 ]& X# z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 U; Q  b7 w  I+ n2 V2 V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% y: J! y8 P: y; E; r5 ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, o8 {' `, ?  B& X+ p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- x$ a' |" u% h, x- L2 ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
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<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, J" B0 Z& L+ N( H& }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& W% g5 g4 h  Y1 I- x* V1 m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 T1 y, X. K' S! e( T$ g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 e! Q% E5 @. R$ p2 R% [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- I; D5 c% p/ `1 t) H2 @$ m, M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! R/ v  W  j' ]1 v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ H3 J% W% z, Q2 \* j9 H) A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 X( V1 n5 u$ A2 V# `) a5 O) K) y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 J. @- @# v9 T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 b. {8 B9 v+ p0 [- s% K/ v( p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 o% w4 A! B5 K: K0 L( Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>