【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, u. i, r: i$ `/ J5 C& z, R1 ]+ VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 d/ Q; X" Z7 v6 K3 lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 L* J% c, f! eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: x7 j9 |) d" ?5 J% ?# j  HEvery other word you utter is love
3 B2 @! Z! r' j# p# W' P1 }+ f0 d8 \/ YI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 Z3 i1 N) R5 eNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: r; O% b$ G- w. xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: ?2 ^' s8 _/ ?( qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ P1 k% q4 Z* `& f1 N9 ]" hWith such a tongue as yours,
, s* `0 x# s% k8 r" VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ C3 p) Q1 ]) L* g, x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" S( O+ O8 w& W7 L5 h9 N* k/ e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 w* x' n  z5 V6 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! r3 X, G1 l9 q# f8 R8 F9 w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  m) W. Q8 B& i  N$ I1 b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& i0 P# ~% f2 u- |7 w3 t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 ]! @# \, V4 x$ O  E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) h* ?0 c5 {. Q4 E$ @1 u2 L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& ?% K5 a) a$ c# Z' z2 e5 g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 L- ^: P6 u# G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- u, X& Q' M/ c7 `0 M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' m9 l# [/ u2 y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 `( A+ \" l8 ]. {* O9 ?' W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 q9 p- N8 T( H7 k; O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 G0 K' `" d+ J* |9 a# A* h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 c# j$ G- p# p! h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 e0 _5 [5 ]; l" l0 B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* H( m/ L8 j2 T6 [$ o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 A* v4 L5 V/ \* V4 x5 f<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 y- d9 Q% [7 e; g' _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 o4 Y% U( k+ ~! L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# _2 i# @5 {" @" A( g' t, }# K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 D9 T8 h0 e% j/ N0 K3 ?9 d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ p; Z: H7 q& ?" U我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>