【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- o7 ?4 w5 `# m5 ]5 u) U! z  S4 Y, ?歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ ?0 ?7 y/ d8 c* E/ m! g( KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) _' B6 X; U+ k, a+ b- sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, i+ `$ b( G! gWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 r* w7 x3 q5 N! L$ V- I$ @You needn’t fear anything
2 E' s& V: O* \0 B0 I& @4 wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 J6 \; y2 p0 zEvery other word you utter is love
7 F2 u/ D4 _  [8 tI really want to know just how much you love me
' K% x) T% b, a6 M# oI love you I love you with all my heart
, v- \" O5 Y. G4 X! qNothing can compare to my love
) G- b( d: j" G: D  d/ dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 I, F/ z& d$ G- Y2 S( V: O. _+ @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ L* m% f/ w& U( o! a3 |! YI want so much to see inside your heart
4 X6 Q/ H1 v6 k. ?2 j: a) nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% V$ h  N7 [! `I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' G- f$ m5 b$ p6 T$ A6 m* \3 ]& uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. E' g8 E% H7 Z* g  rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" R( B- ]1 x; w3 O: e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ s) K8 o! W0 y# s8 F/ H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: n: X& ?) Z8 I/ _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" U5 E; t# @5 e! E3 s5 ~6 o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 L, f3 v/ A2 K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 {. i6 f2 J* G6 m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 Z; q$ {+ |  K: C# `  b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* @0 S; [4 k, U9 d<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 }! M; w6 s. z5 n: n* a: J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% z6 \) x1 ^4 q) d4 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ l6 K  w: P- t0 `1 I: R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 x6 e# z, a+ n9 ?0 K# v: M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' X! W2 @4 w& S4 ~& v; i% k% S4 e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( ^3 p( U" `/ J% S7 M+ F& t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 W9 G7 [% E0 [4 e& P! d" n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! T  J  s, }* M" x" W0 P4 @' V. a1 q' G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 ^: u# c" y5 R! t+ x: V$ v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( x6 ~; P. s- ?! y% }# l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) E4 {/ U, ~- e- ?, q6 \7 H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( r+ L( d: D- H) @, _8 R  T, h+ ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- @! W6 h* T0 `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& X8 W9 Q4 l8 i( j8 P$ }% J/ C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, E1 n9 R- `, d) }1 j: f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 ~1 ^2 S4 D9 Z2 L+ W6 s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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% M& M; l( j9 ]9 _: X" ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>