【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. H7 j- ]- Y( k- a" K歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 d3 P) ~! `& ^; W- J7 KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 A; h6 L' E( e" i. W, \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! W; G* K* w% R0 `6 g8 z5 ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 r' M1 I6 v9 \. Q. q' c$ SWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 B0 h; P5 D+ ?+ ~1 ?9 FYou needn’t fear anything
' J7 ?( f3 K4 S1 S& Y8 E: V+ yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  E7 o7 f- h+ M; t$ iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 X+ J6 V; l, c$ Y% u% A8 xNothing can compare to my love
, h/ \, n; H% ?2 D7 ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 |8 L$ `7 k# O, \4 b! QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 F- _) ~5 h: LI want so much to see inside your heart
' Y- i2 V0 U+ g6 ^1 OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 a9 h& u4 e, a4 {# B, KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, r; D4 x; G8 s: ]1 b" q" O7 p/ P; y* VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ U, ^: k3 d# Y3 J6 E! j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 R  B) l, B3 ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 [0 U* E/ {! D3 f% d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: H0 p) ]1 F1 m: G  F" D$ p1 A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; v9 j8 Q0 ?$ b5 f8 h- Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. F8 ~" i/ B4 i$ ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 p$ `& J, A8 z  w' T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 ?5 i+ p$ c5 O: |; j/ A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 G! P8 Z. ]. }; t: }" U; i; a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 l& M' u- ?" a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ g$ V# n  U6 `. ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 N0 [' H' S% @& H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* U" R4 ?6 k- q4 {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 T) J% e% L* `7 s: i  G6 P; J! p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 g6 w& B  w' X' p$ s* b+ R  U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  ~8 M  _' T& L2 L; n' Q0 x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. m! E5 w# a8 F; `$ j<P>I regret not dying</P>
) x* G- L% Z7 h% J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& I9 S+ G  E8 s1 ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 z- }1 y6 D5 k; v5 p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& T1 |8 p2 E" v$ f* v. d. S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) x7 U$ u, i; V6 q5 a5 Q$ F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. i2 Y+ t: F% t- C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 {' |; P7 ~8 `, ^& f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# l( D9 |! w) x! V) D3 u9 T- |; G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  f: s" B( r! M: J+ n我请你剖开它

$ K' V# U4 u, B9 M- }, o6 } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 P; Y. u! f8 s& T4 W. W, p; z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>