【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
3 F4 ^! ^( T: i+ C5 I* s* O! i& rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 `$ u4 T, }7 L5 |1 ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
  Q0 _7 m7 I% E0 jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! ^/ e( [+ w, f: S, ]The sky is happy down to its soul
- P* f: G" d4 k. \. L# F& Y1 tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; V" z; V4 \8 ^  W: cNothing can compare to my love
/ _$ l3 f  t$ ~$ ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ ^# [, M/ a7 |" L  B: z! zI’m still filled with fear
; C$ g$ a3 j4 y2 f  G3 JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( Z+ W- `& M* [5 t$ g- i- nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; q: a# H, j$ z9 ^+ t" E# [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# I$ i( w# a- N0 z& M8 @8 s1 ^9 w: gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ f( l  T7 ^6 l1 h1 }" ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- t( d4 M! C$ H; I8 }: B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* J: [0 _! D4 d" q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: W5 S1 s: y4 B: D& Y* {+ A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# R8 x. a* D7 ~; j0 _6 A4 E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 _4 F8 I, L) S& R! D6 q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 w! [- X" z4 X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, O4 ~* q5 l- f( Q& x0 H6 J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ F! J! m& g) L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ J/ T) B$ x+ ~  F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 O4 n( o" d- R4 ], d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 d9 q% J7 F5 A+ L3 f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& T7 R. y5 @( i+ ^0 V& R( A+ r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! t+ v/ \: x$ m, F. E) E- A2 R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- B( E% p# n/ g' K" u4 x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 g: b' n8 K- I+ e" b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# V4 k* W' H/ |' p% a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( D( T% t, ~$ Q( Z5 U: ]! b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 F0 G$ _4 k# r8 g0 _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* E; O! D" A8 @2 d2 `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& g8 q3 D/ P9 v. l0 Y) K" K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) R- p- i# v- t/ _! ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 p6 T# X; `! [" e" T# Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 u3 R: v: v$ g+ S! v6 `2 r% r/ M/ d) U4 x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 |( |) w8 I: D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ L5 M  y( e* m' l8 P: y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 E( U, S9 q6 H我请你剖开它

4 d: _/ E) ~- M5 f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>