【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 N- W9 E2 P# b歌词我附在后面。
% ^4 @0 j1 U: J% l5 X7 y) G. EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  h' i9 Q( ~* g& U' vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( @# L  G7 L# [1 L7 g, VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# Z' |, T* I" [" AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: x) U5 {( Z. o& I0 x9 c; QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& ^7 p& L. k" OYou needn’t fear anything
- |9 e7 U1 n0 J1 ^4 a# A9 EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ ^* a' b& C& h4 L- a% xEvery other word you utter is love
7 _: m5 d& ?1 jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 E. j0 E; D9 [% g9 j" s! i' e! ~Nothing can compare to my love
* n3 i5 U4 W1 j* \8 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 {1 Q+ F: f0 y% K4 KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; u6 T- m. C: wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 h4 R3 ^# q! a2 o5 JI’m still filled with fear
5 K; K% m8 \  N- pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* ?/ v# J6 g% c4 kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 k9 v6 O" d2 m% @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  q! S; U! N' e% ?2 b9 |+ URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, S( a. u% j/ t9 i. ?% C6 D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 b  O0 m  [, Q( |) q- z0 `7 U2 k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) O6 U: a* ^0 u6 |5 q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ F1 t  O+ z9 S$ L9 Q; K. O5 L; B, T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 v9 F$ U. V7 P0 F+ [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" w9 t9 W2 H4 d# b- D& }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; R# l# ?% S8 g% h& l/ k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( S1 M! I4 x' e2 {2 ]1 ^/ U* s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ D! U6 P8 V0 \! b6 ^9 a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 s5 L( R/ m  D2 P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 Y8 }$ C' v0 x& L5 U, M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# v/ Y5 Z2 b7 T" P& `5 O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; C9 y7 g1 l+ ~3 c; g, T6 n# b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 x$ q7 O, G% R3 Q2 S' h9 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- m# X+ t2 C5 U) |3 O: f2 `, g. F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 r6 D* c2 S1 d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ \0 B6 @, n1 B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, f$ E7 x. X2 R7 m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ n7 R  {) ^# q8 d7 o. k/ X6 V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 `8 V* g0 k2 k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# [  r6 C- s! p* z  c: c, J3 q# \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ [5 O3 Q" P3 v8 g% `& X9 e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ E, O3 B4 \& ?  n( E( _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 V' m  G5 ^# X; ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 s0 [0 N+ U. `. X% K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- b0 y' _# V' [( m/ k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ Y: s5 S* G) c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' x" @, ]8 b1 s! w我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; D6 \" v/ I6 p9 v) P; o$ ^1 m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>