【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ f) y2 B0 i7 u2 s" @4 r歌词我附在后面。
8 _' h  _2 z) r# }The moonlight is shining brightly,
& f3 F) u, @* x2 QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 s/ F  D* a* B5 N; c" mThe sky is happy down to its soul
& t+ l' j' g1 M5 Y) S: X8 ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. s$ E/ c) Q0 r/ ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' \( z0 |" v% N! eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 o; D3 v5 g' L& Y9 OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; L' y# M, I1 r- v( UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 u: ]3 R2 \9 l+ U" d2 W% r# WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% s$ V+ i' z2 g; O  d" yI’m still filled with fear
0 Q: {# z- G* v* ~4 S# H, E- ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 x- ]' q$ Q6 kI regret not dying
2 F) M, d$ C( f3 O1 wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# A. t; k  v  |" Z( IWith such a tongue as yours,
' q' _1 }# x  ^$ g# ?0 ]6 y% vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 \+ C0 L% d% N! F; J: [8 RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& m+ y" k% r( C8 D! B" e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* `1 U# X- Z$ r$ F, ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% Y5 O3 j( j! q& `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, T5 D, \, Q* J8 v0 O$ \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' D2 R5 `. J& g- x- M, q, {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 r5 A7 L( p* Y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ K% e0 G7 g3 Y; r0 B2 y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 |; t. _: w/ x' t" d: e; T* K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) L- q& L; S+ w% H/ z( K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- v2 s4 d, w) m$ ~* L% ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 s$ _1 \0 N" {. A( b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( ~0 u5 u, L, {9 b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 ~+ i. L: p7 d6 I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( a7 ~3 N0 [6 ^; B  r* j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- E& ~- H- N) ?# y8 x+ i2 D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 ?0 c: D" n7 Z( `# t/ O2 Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 z. \% [: Z% V4 M' j; J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 M+ A( p1 E/ M+ f; m5 p  d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& v) D. |+ i8 k: E  T( n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 `) @5 G$ Z0 N$ A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; l( [* y$ j- _$ Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 [4 H) B0 r. B* I0 [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 u5 T$ m8 n0 s" z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- j" n4 P. j7 l: a1 j+ s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>