【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ H% e+ ^. g/ HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 I* W1 `* L: f; [8 s6 R; [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 D1 F! k$ _+ m0 l/ m. PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  H: E% @. O$ @& ^8 ~5 Y+ ^) \With the moon kissing it every night
+ P; N) x6 y4 t6 B! ?Seeing the sky content with its love
0 w' q) M% q3 w! r4 G/ M+ l7 pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  [* x  F# I0 |4 s& J. uI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 h3 c. p9 I6 y! G( }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: K* H5 C- ]3 FI want so much to see inside your heart
; h0 A% y, r+ E, F7 R7 `; xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. j, O. U5 ?/ o. C' m- Y" BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& ^& N7 q) M' W9 k3 C2 F5 u$ pWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& u! w. Q6 Z1 W" {2 q7 [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# ?% C6 ~* k) X9 d" ~: D) U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  B4 e$ R1 n3 W3 D# W8 w1 J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 f  @# g6 A0 T. \: d) d! _  m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( Q( N- L3 J$ n" Q" L% g<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% }" i/ N: r8 Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 m4 p9 [1 W* j/ r3 G/ i7 l) O! I# y0 E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. }& d$ H% D! A& X$ |5 c<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# H" i3 e0 \5 B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 r8 ]8 e1 h% u: f1 O. F' A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" Z9 J% T: ^$ `6 J5 ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" z. I/ B; V; b! M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# u- l; L6 i# u4 J5 x! |% l- b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* T2 O, S) b/ @( a0 c, R9 r' g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% y' _! }: x: S  ]" \3 b( b) h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 Y( Z6 \3 R1 P' Y9 t( Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; n) I& R- d3 u( l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 S# x: k% t# `. r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, l3 V+ B! r# r2 T$ Y5 z1 n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 @8 b, J: C, L6 Z: m8 U( V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 }) U) `( L$ e( ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 c) \* S; i  Z( @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; o& G( _2 ]* o7 g: q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( M$ g( }$ V' R- z) i! J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 D  l8 ?$ e) \; e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>