【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; b( z5 m: n) q, F- d2 Z9 k+ U: i歌词我附在后面。
8 n; e5 L: Y* |& FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ ^% T: Y3 Q" ~. BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ j, @. I$ _$ i, V  XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# z. R, i% ?( X0 R4 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; q7 l5 J& g+ N4 t+ ^4 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
" n! D9 }# A& D; q$ cWith the moon kissing it every night
, A4 s# ]4 E0 CSeeing the sky content with its love
0 L; S0 P3 X, @2 T% QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( B3 V$ M! z& \0 o, @; G  T! P& K# aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! y# t; \! l9 _- G& Q, rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- e7 b5 F( c) UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( l& ?- e* m0 x0 PI want so much to see inside your heart
+ m" c1 f+ e$ FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 d' @% t4 V% m0 K1 z" bI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. k1 a* o# d: ]$ ~7 n& ~I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" b3 t9 C9 ^" X" ZWith such a tongue as yours,
( h) f6 k, T2 t! ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) H' |6 T3 q3 y0 B: n- SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* ^. y+ b. c# {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 |9 P8 D" a! }) t/ O) Q3 q) c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) G# b. g* n; T/ U- e- Q8 P4 L8 F, v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 z( M$ l0 ~' V1 V) o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( q9 p6 i) K+ Q- [& F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' E5 ~, x6 \& ]" u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: Z& Z9 O% ?2 g, \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: T$ U6 `3 D7 `* ~' s) n' t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* w# \* ^0 C, h* p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) v, X) b2 V7 y  L  l0 k$ B: U1 N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! g1 Q7 J" m$ c9 ~6 G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ D3 i0 P6 h* g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 Q; j0 O; S) k2 U9 l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 O/ V/ U, l% h7 n9 f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 g+ x. ]8 i  H$ v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% f7 N  Z1 F8 k  m0 n# I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 M0 |5 L6 `5 d$ t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 Q% z( \: L+ a/ A, s4 o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# a4 c6 h9 {1 X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 A8 V- g$ F! N% k: x) Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 s- W1 `1 C" X4 p& ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( D' d( F3 f/ c! t8 g<P>I regret not dying</P>
* e  C( t) g! ]7 M( E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% H0 n4 i3 K6 n+ j) U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 E, Z. a; y+ t4 V0 w7 f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% d; \5 h' N8 a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, r6 o, H# i! L1 m9 j4 E" ^0 B" ]<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! u* ~( K, X( r+ a% z; R5 A0 S" C' y  J我请你剖开它
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# y' m: o3 X. e3 q0 \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>