【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 [  U- I- V2 J- u: l歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- X* e" L# E+ nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 J$ {, P9 \/ d; p8 V) |  Q4 _9 c2 r/ vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" ~2 g7 s' e. L7 gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 y  E# m: r+ l# S' r+ T! fYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* o- h! e9 X$ J* T) ^, k, n1 b& \I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 M2 w6 \7 `3 \( P( s9 S2 hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) l% I" F0 S9 X8 ]3 @/ B/ KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( n1 o" B1 T8 ^% L1 E8 [4 }I’m still filled with fear
2 L6 q5 f$ R- P8 h6 PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  ]; E# [! f9 r# o$ b, m( wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 N+ r+ U/ J" ?- p, oWith such a tongue as yours,
6 N! y& c, f0 p% H7 ?# PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, E5 E) w' R9 N4 x# y) }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 B  l! H  p. x& {* t7 C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 l. k  s' G1 n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 x. U+ X) _  n/ z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* o  \7 {" A* {$ E" F) t9 l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 t# O8 g( x8 H6 {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 F1 W- b/ i  W+ z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( [8 M3 y- a+ ]5 x9 O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. e# z9 j2 `2 k3 ^- e% q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: s6 V$ _: ~5 B; z  u8 l+ {5 O<P>你无需担心</P>
  p  D) C4 m2 Y% S3 T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- M9 q3 |1 H! a# K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. O1 N: v3 _7 Z; m/ _1 G6 p' d% a) a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- z4 y% z& J! M5 t0 C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% L" P' s1 T2 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 c9 @$ ~+ {4 _. ]/ k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% ~; O, e# |! D! {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& s, q; i1 O9 n8 s- {/ A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 b! k- l. V( B. I. Z# }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 n5 B. M" j* {: B% F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% C3 d. j+ W  L8 g8 T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" k% k& k2 G9 S3 ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* l5 H# C5 a6 Y( Q$ Y7 H' r) }4 k7 b% c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 G2 G2 q6 r, q% r8 E2 `, Y5 l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 a- h' T; X! p+ r5 v8 {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ v' x; j' B8 m( x# u) n4 l7 H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>