【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- z0 ~1 K& u8 X  Y9 V2 R歌词我附在后面。
( _; c# c" w. P2 K( O% U  r5 i7 gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ j4 H2 f) n6 p- @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 ~6 J# t. n2 W& y0 DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 u5 n0 n3 K$ m* r0 x8 kSeeing the sky content with its love
" y. \0 M: A' ]( V* CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# |4 w, H- _: p" ]. G! uYou needn’t fear anything
8 q& O/ B0 [2 F; ~% _' b2 }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ J# H) z" q4 d* fEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 r9 u! d7 ?& d; mI love you I love you with all my heart
# X# D7 D. c! V, H; i' r1 g, p0 ANothing can compare to my love
  J  z. x. U. U- ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 X1 r9 ]; O! YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: A5 {, @4 n4 W5 ~I want so much to see inside your heart
$ x- c9 \1 b( II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# V8 G0 G0 u( c$ v6 z" B0 ^I regret not dying
! ^' X, O: P0 D; [. JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ [. d% m* H* gWith such a tongue as yours,
7 ]& M  _! k0 |: h5 T3 ]1 d8 I/ S2 zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( H& |( x0 C+ J) s( \7 `$ O6 mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, n5 b7 D  J; `8 ^' B+ Q4 IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 h0 V- h" ]# M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- `# F9 y' ~# q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 b4 j8 C% v, O4 o* H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 l( s" U- `! v" F. U9 b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) D  B+ K% i$ O. c, `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; J- B. H( J/ G! e; W! Y$ @- ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 {% W4 L2 o. l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# ~: K2 A; t2 \4 Z* Y6 {  T8 D! v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; O5 O/ f6 o6 ?* \4 |5 j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 U+ W" V3 A* X5 c7 H; G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 {5 i$ T6 a2 B" K9 u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; |7 x$ Z8 K  a/ K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% W3 q" h& Y3 I2 W& |+ u8 b& L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 S) q; q+ B# W; j2 Q% S  K; L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- w* D% Y- T( h/ o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 @% y, f  z' x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 ^5 q! U& r! g; d0 Y0 u! T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, x+ Y# B% Z: X( V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 I4 p+ t; _& H& }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% @8 v: b# L& p0 P4 q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 I, Y) |9 o4 Q$ B2 B0 i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 G1 D9 n* _8 t  i  b; h! C% a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( I! v0 Y! f+ i  |0 q2 x( ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 ^2 L& }, B1 d$ U# I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& r+ s: U6 z# w( @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 n' O9 O% |# I$ D0 c* R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 H5 h+ E6 m% U7 Z; J5 x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' Y7 a& F3 U5 c, }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: b' `( J- E& U( l9 l4 t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) e" J' K8 e4 z- t0 R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: u9 d( A( A& i( B! _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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& N( U9 }5 p) x+ h9 E& w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% Q4 z" s' F/ N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>