【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  }( H: |, x, \3 }4 C+ z歌词我附在后面。
# M: C" H9 x( B) a( eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! a! c0 \% Y- ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
: X! h# `* I3 O6 y1 c+ t8 SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* D0 \# x2 E  D2 A) OThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ u$ `) I0 w. Q8 @With the moon kissing it every night
% o$ c) v6 C9 `; ~1 k  J  aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& C0 a- \" [& U3 R' Q& r" aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 ?+ k9 J# P" \" u& n* |+ c2 NEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% t* P9 |& u- M( hI love you I love you with all my heart
; F6 I0 |) L1 D  o2 T) V! }Nothing can compare to my love
& \, k, n9 R( {% x6 @8 w* iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- b$ _! i  Y: Y+ _5 BI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( m7 Q, F: _/ M& d6 ~9 m# \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% i0 v1 @4 G' h  i) B! {* C- a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% K; C( J0 p1 D% m- B& o7 }- m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. a. I+ M9 j# u: g: U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% Q4 b" z6 y3 R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 ~& b1 E  w0 Y* ?* J7 {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# P% s! m, v, b: r* e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  H& Z% c" q  h# j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! w3 N/ ~7 U8 L9 H) n& x0 w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 W. j' y2 j- `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! V( ]" Q9 B  L3 T% J) A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, m, W& x2 o; J4 B; s4 w. d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% m: @/ i+ \4 N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* M2 T, F+ F3 x. m) L# ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. P" v/ s/ b; j1 k0 q: n6 g; v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 M/ c+ j7 |- `; M% l5 p9 t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' F& A" z; p; W1 c0 Q8 A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 `! q- v3 v# A8 u9 ^3 x" W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# J- |! |: u9 v8 d4 [& H' M9 M% Y) a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ p" O* z0 ^9 ^! b! R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 K8 b8 D6 Y% `0 \5 z* {; H  {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 L1 |9 y$ ^" p! _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 E) U1 h  Z" e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 Q5 j6 m% {. s6 ?, A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ w2 m$ ]; L0 j2 @1 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 y- U! ~. r# ^9 t$ B! F0 e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" v5 A: o5 v4 e# o2 l) B1 C  n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ `6 O5 T, X; X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ y# |1 k) G, c3 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- L1 a7 F4 b8 ]; ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& F3 L+ _+ H; T( l/ v! |, v$ n我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>