【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- V, c0 |  S) O3 t) W) G& J" f3 FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; R' A# B3 c2 b) C4 }& |Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 _) E# y, Y$ v) @& a( ~; wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# q' T7 z+ O) @! I5 q+ kWith the moon kissing it every night
* M! J5 L, n4 n* w8 ZSeeing the sky content with its love
- f' ]  c0 T. x$ B# }/ qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: G' \' C5 W- V/ i# o0 @  sYou needn’t fear anything
- ]& F! p/ s6 u( u' p: v) sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# B: i1 M9 Y( B9 bEvery other word you utter is love
) w( A* C& i$ H, n0 G: e8 ]I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 ^( T4 X+ x$ MNothing can compare to my love
" f- ]1 f8 e8 y/ iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 i* p, H$ M) L8 U, Z' }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 M$ V$ D8 s7 gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 ^& Q( n( ^( ?6 _& p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( I) R* U. r! o  F1 i; m7 I# s, h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 O6 `# G* @. s* ]1 r: h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, i) c$ A. d1 f( B1 J6 A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 k. O$ f* D2 @$ s/ f0 x3 X0 Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ R; \/ s( j; @* v) {0 B$ u7 U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 q; q! G* |+ B% Z% a2 ?# D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 D- O7 a- e  w5 D6 x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- x# M* S- U, K2 C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 u- D% v$ O, ]6 ?& |2 _5 c  _# N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' @/ {8 u- a2 j0 h) ~- o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" {" o. F! X% O( z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% `* m4 _- Z; Y- ~6 A4 r" o+ }  d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& Y6 z, j* Y7 [: j. A0 k' I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! t+ m8 R3 v  A3 V! b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 h9 F2 O' m. N4 o4 m0 b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 M& B: r7 n3 C3 W7 k  j( L4 C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ X  O$ X; Z) ?+ W2 a% c* x7 s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ V  T! Y- @3 ^% `; a( \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 T" i: C# Y6 b( }- @3 |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 j- Z3 j- k% B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ w7 m# h0 M0 D/ Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' p" C) o( g  }" L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( j0 T9 I" W# x* C0 a' {9 G4 s8 F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. t6 I* {; M: ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% n+ G: ^! r7 \4 V' Q  _% B8 Q+ w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 ]9 ~1 ]$ l$ p; Z8 r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 r' ^+ q: `4 Q4 W- ~: Q& D! K  g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- }& H$ ]! V& R8 g$ ^: z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# W9 O. k2 I4 v, C3 ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>