【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 R! X. {2 Z8 d- H/ I" BThe sky is happy down to its soul
& H5 D. {. r; S$ g2 I! hWith the moon kissing it every night
- f8 E; M/ W7 `7 o9 e5 S5 Q$ m' ^Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ \) i5 A* ^% w8 {: d1 d% _! EYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 n5 C1 j3 ^: mI really want to know just how much you love me
0 K' D8 U' ^5 R4 }, ~  k7 r5 tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! u1 J8 ?3 f+ }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 p9 Z; r( y' p; d. \7 EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( C- V* f$ T2 ?( UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 z4 f. ^* ^! P: X$ ?3 ^* I  G$ n& uWith such a tongue as yours,
# H' @* H, m! ^3 j2 m; q: I* h1 M8 hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- I8 P/ Q/ T% k  {1 w: qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ V5 [* Y& J/ S/ Z8 ^/ B" q$ fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. [! O- y6 J! ?% Z: b: J) g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( o2 x5 p$ e! m  G% v) k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) z# |+ m. y4 b4 o+ _' Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) P! E4 \, i7 G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 t" P( \- J( G$ P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) B; S" [) T' L# {& ~0 }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" w. Y8 P9 P' y5 Y; N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- ]/ R3 w6 s1 @/ w" ^<P>你无需担心</P>
6 V1 ^+ R/ |' k/ G  D% [) B1 m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! H2 u/ y! f  ?' y) F$ L9 {' I9 W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* E# o: Z: t" u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; \* Z9 V' j* Z/ S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ b' g9 k7 d* v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) d! P7 M: b4 _2 j* N6 Y6 e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% S& x& s: C7 ~; m$ r; H5 r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( @  b  d9 ]) g- B6 A/ u# k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% I; j- D. Q5 [. T+ ^2 j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- C! G: n: r& i3 f4 w3 K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% s& H) G; z& c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: w% n! ~1 f: w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 V8 O5 j! O0 Y2 `% S8 C9 ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" j. q$ Y: A/ t  t1 Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* X6 r5 X- m. e, v% ~7 n5 T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 U6 E& Y! t; q; u/ _<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 B3 E% J' `7 d4 e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! Y! H' h( f; ~2 y  M+ ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 A: v- I" r0 J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ l0 M/ t$ ~: s6 _6 _/ p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: {8 U" B9 |7 w9 X& ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>