【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 E1 M3 R$ I# \( K7 \; p6 I; M9 Q歌词我附在后面。
$ L0 S9 C% Y  v, `The moonlight is shining brightly,
& S7 M: u* H+ y1 d  d+ XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 r: g- G( L! @& o( K1 ]6 }" ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 E/ K/ ~- p( V% v( ]. AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 ]5 {# K& @0 Z/ n! C5 fThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ _9 Q4 g1 z1 I6 `With the moon kissing it every night
+ ~* k/ E6 Y, _/ p( eSeeing the sky content with its love
1 m. d: g+ ^, z9 m- jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 k5 a) s* x, ^* NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) `7 x1 m' z# F2 nEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 _7 |9 ~/ u6 W% N& C' ?I love you I love you with all my heart
4 J& Q' [+ H: p! j) i0 }Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 i/ P2 y3 J/ S4 A1 vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 A8 h! {$ K5 X$ Y$ e6 IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& i" h2 P3 L0 }# v* ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' L. W4 m$ ?6 K& O8 ]! @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* H3 j+ k- o* d- |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 `' M1 u, K! c" ^. D4 W% ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 x" E( f5 e8 @/ S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% E% _9 g* M! t4 e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 o* g3 ?# F" D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ @9 H" U! r9 m* R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; `1 g6 D5 q& c2 M& ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, e& K5 A9 z4 j<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ k# }% e( ?8 J3 `* c, \1 m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 N/ q/ Z8 `& v! O( v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ n) ]( v5 G" d# Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 x# F# ]6 _& J( V1 ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' u, b8 }: r, L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; S; y9 v3 {* x! H6 d<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: F& ]9 c' l( p) e( l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 p; L* d  m( E" S7 ~7 E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 ^, V4 ]5 o* ?. \& w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" ^) r  b0 {% J9 O& ~2 E' W3 D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 X* Z. @3 v9 y$ t& k  p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' \7 d9 \' k5 p, C5 {5 T# K1 N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; ^2 y" x" |+ b! r, J2 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: I6 x' X& F& E8 k* u- I7 f5 D7 {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 u4 h$ Q" w7 I8 L+ E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 g- n. E) v* t$ e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) G9 ?2 H7 J; Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 _: ~0 X" l9 v9 C4 t, p+ _9 ], r  v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 u4 {2 {6 I9 q6 M5 y, p<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- p; }- J0 I5 M2 B( u. J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ d6 e  X( Q4 p* ^) S& X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 P; Q6 i9 ~: I5 E8 \' `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! R0 U0 Q5 ~3 |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

8 i1 P$ s  u3 p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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