【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; y6 v6 l* o/ H! N" Z歌词我附在后面。
8 ~! H  R1 d' I; ]4 k+ P/ E% lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ [  v: s7 ~0 \& I  rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) V  Z* R. X5 f$ d& `The sky is happy down to its soul
- C& e9 \+ H4 U) U/ ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! z# V( Z# N# c; C1 DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 a( `7 U% x, x& [8 @: e  ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; f# @. y3 b7 A- pI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* ?, D6 s1 j4 t8 D2 SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! z1 e3 q+ c: q9 CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( ]9 O& O& {) M& I7 S. e' O6 zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ \& E4 z! C' T; \: _+ d" P6 iWith such a tongue as yours,
& N3 T: R: S& O% o9 A* b' s# CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 a. p% T: o5 A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 a; L! ~( }' _: O+ x2 T; @( f% G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 D6 W9 L! W2 ^8 a" c4 x" c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, @1 Z) U& ^: B/ q+ U5 B5 X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 O# P3 T4 L, M1 f# a7 C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, T0 G8 z: ^) G% Q) S; T9 ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ [$ c' b3 l2 j+ Z. Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ m) X; {" `4 }! f; w1 B1 @) \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* e9 ~0 I* V* C: z5 q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  y7 A+ R3 Q+ }3 u9 @% @3 Q1 x<P>你无需担心</P>
% A4 e; I! ^6 U4 B& _  w# @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# g5 U+ x* B( b; A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: ], L+ M& _9 r: F& [2 H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 I$ k: x3 k; o; e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 Q4 D0 f* P2 f4 P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; d5 c6 \( |9 |' {4 V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! [2 C  R4 K( e; Z9 N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, b+ v1 g' X7 T2 I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% D3 x4 ]3 X0 I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 I6 {3 n0 F1 ]* a' i% P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 a9 M  O7 b5 E1 C& Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" B# V8 Y7 S" ^- M% \" D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 f, l, @/ X& n$ K# u& a- T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% K( e$ a7 M9 i9 k/ O3 F3 {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 ^$ n) l! q1 ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  j3 W$ p2 C9 Z5 A/ z5 `3 @' g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  Z8 @0 l, a8 N  ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" K+ B2 [( U$ z" w6 }* I& L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 h1 R8 R) g) u( f6 `) e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) K& x% ^1 \& H# H我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>