【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: \7 \/ ]* i1 y% ~2 @1 g. a: V歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" `5 |1 z, P* |6 NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 Y  w/ R9 @5 k) X9 Z$ AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 T0 t5 `1 _0 E; T8 T, S* F" f2 t# H. RWith the moon kissing it every night
  |" ^% I1 B7 t5 nSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- m8 |& w' x) q$ ]$ ~You needn’t fear anything
9 w. a+ j. j6 g" qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: f" f4 }7 Y! a3 H: [Every other word you utter is love
& V0 ]0 l9 `; t3 [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  S5 r# m" V- E& p$ JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 L" X; k; G& t/ hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# `1 b* ~+ g1 k4 o3 E1 [2 sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' ^, U0 l4 [* F; x+ M+ o% [8 X5 sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 f9 h2 C* {2 GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ h9 @& c, v/ Q1 ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  J! W% L0 c6 S' E' j  \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 `  S8 w. X4 D2 }9 M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& A, q! m4 X$ ^0 k2 C: O9 ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 B; E" u- V/ n) E) o' {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 V4 `9 }: m+ z. P. [9 ^6 m. P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 N3 h. z4 N6 O8 S1 N) j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: Y: \4 X/ {( k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% F$ m6 g; G) B$ g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 a7 c  g( G, D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) N  K1 T, X9 l) B: n  S<P>你无需担心</P>
9 d7 A2 t5 J: m/ L8 l, }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ i3 ^9 n2 o  V* s; [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: t% S9 l  S0 }+ \" g7 w+ S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" f3 @8 {. c: P; A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* [9 A5 e; x5 E" P+ Q& T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! O4 G. k/ \8 k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ w! U) X0 B- x9 y9 X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# ~# X; f: Z& E' |0 a- [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) T- y. |( Z/ H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, p1 s  f4 V  n2 l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ v2 ]/ |/ ~8 w# k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* M) {$ P! W( z* C* U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" p! I& [1 _/ \. r% E1 `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ ^4 [; a9 u5 B( |! |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# J) H1 D* g' A/ K  u( m& O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: Q$ {8 k, y& P) ~7 }4 z, O7 p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 E% F+ e% R' g3 s* ~+ p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 G1 w: g+ c* D4 r7 u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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6 I8 x- g$ T7 g  t3 u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& \) F, y5 \  S$ J6 ]/ S0 r+ V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>