【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 Y6 K. j3 l& `+ EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ w% p& B9 a; r/ l5 n- N$ J  X" k  FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 m2 }1 z$ d4 h$ T# B; ]2 mThe sky is happy down to its soul
! g6 [4 u5 D1 o$ N5 W2 KWith the moon kissing it every night
# e6 p$ K6 \* M" x- d9 NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ ^  v7 ^7 r: I0 XI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 p- K7 b) _7 dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ Q1 d2 q$ U/ r2 [' g' R# xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 J7 t. u- f4 M7 gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  V" U: O- p, [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& a3 P/ s9 p  z* p7 W: i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 M1 _1 t+ ]. \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 X- G7 v' Z; v: Y8 w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 x3 X: I# k+ r/ d, q) y8 @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 ~- i. T  U0 N7 p. i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; i( c9 l& L7 `/ D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- p% |0 ~& t/ A4 I( l5 p9 S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: {! d/ q6 a) X  A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ Z: n4 a7 l$ B# \( j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! {2 t( T" r7 ~- q/ t$ _" H  }7 z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 B; B# G; h! o$ @. e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ Q( T* R& N4 o9 R" Q0 C: ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ ^# @5 s$ B  m/ }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% r, K% l/ M2 l) z3 R( R; r& N7 S4 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. n' l; Q, G8 j2 \* O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 @# x5 d5 ?- K0 I& }; B2 b" b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ u2 z  ?; Q8 J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 m( e5 F9 x- w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! p- i: n$ o, x5 p! S! R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 ]( U" e/ x: t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) |0 J8 [+ `- j6 W9 m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 G( w; Q$ u4 u) ?- p% H<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 P+ ~; ^* W0 t3 J* N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' R# B, ^, P( T+ R' }4 }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 ?% A0 K* [8 d* @' E, {$ u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, _) P# c5 |/ F3 L  G4 k  O7 j/ ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% F0 I+ P8 P1 k! j3 [: I7 C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ m, C$ R" `; X' g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>