【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 o0 V7 ~6 i1 ?1 R; I歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" y. r% o/ l5 yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. D$ I0 ], x4 n5 K0 ]# [/ ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ s1 `4 Z/ U6 ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: ]! q- g7 {/ K. s6 }3 U" CYou needn’t fear anything
, a" [" M# T* K/ q$ `% `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ {# l6 ~) {0 e7 X8 ]9 G, y) {Every other word you utter is love
  h$ R4 I; h0 s+ a, r6 ]I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' ?/ p! B, }" J9 n6 A, ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 }( v3 Y" H% }6 h/ s, fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 \4 m0 v, y$ b& Z! \; wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 N& Q3 {1 H5 gI regret not dying
6 C$ K0 ^" m) y. z9 ]. JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% Y$ k+ @8 S) v0 ^" g( F4 K3 tWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; k$ |( z% d) [: i2 G8 ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 K2 M; S2 E, S/ Q2 v/ ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  j: h& R; J3 N0 A1 s; `. F; o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 T" n9 P4 m! Q* u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# P" ^' W0 a1 D# r% f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ h; Q6 D# `1 y' T1 h( r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% V1 c+ Z6 D- |) C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) u4 D0 o7 {4 B; q) e; v' }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* z. `  d+ g8 }* k& r: H1 h9 |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ M( Y1 L5 I( M4 i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( e- A; [/ G  r- t+ a5 c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# f# L& p4 X  B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 @% |& s( {# {& e  R2 C1 f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: J5 L( m% z$ T7 R) |8 r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% j. f) }( U5 q7 r# E( g8 T" n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& A# T9 {* K. M: f- C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 i! a! g7 L. p. e' ~# i* E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 X* ~3 S$ y& X" g7 p$ C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% J, T* F3 U* H' y; K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 p9 x% M. B* r; @0 F% i0 }0 d8 N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  u" z4 Y& c  ~4 g; D3 I. ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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) T4 a: C# Q" K5 s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 n* J0 e9 }$ v) T# G' y8 Q5 I& X0 e1 M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% R5 @* q' e* i$ z& C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>