【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ X! K5 Y1 u: [' c' gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' o2 b  [6 v9 n  ]& BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 A# V4 |+ |" Y  _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! `! J, x  r% q: ]2 J' qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) E9 O  `8 `* E* x- V: j. eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" M& Q4 K9 U3 O; f2 fEvery other word you utter is love
% R' x7 a: c# q  |I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  W* `+ \8 {  b. G; O1 fNothing can compare to my love
: o. Z) D0 O& L8 P" QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 W( ?& W! I7 B9 G" y$ ^9 jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 m+ ?' v2 Q0 M1 JI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, b: S! [  o; II regret not dying
9 X/ s) n2 W  p0 d8 d$ L+ a1 xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 }4 k! n0 d5 k7 v+ ~1 j1 v$ BWith such a tongue as yours,
' P: l: C: ]4 C5 x5 tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! w0 y+ L0 ~- u8 w' s% b) YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 z- V* I- e6 @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- U: f$ i& f, l) H) G/ Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 v/ t+ p5 p7 E8 {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. r- ~# b5 q4 M4 M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) }- E! ?# Z) ]6 ]" b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 f% \! W8 z, X9 [4 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* i9 P0 Q& q3 Q# p" y. C  A% E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" a8 [! S6 N* g5 w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, Q; r2 `9 h* C7 e' |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" C$ O& j" g; j2 l0 i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 {- X7 @; A. E$ g. w# X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' I9 |$ l7 v5 t7 f) ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 m2 q/ _5 c) f7 R+ F: M/ A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 C  }; ]$ V! C) P& ]7 o* a+ \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! ]: R$ \& K0 N0 _5 Q# ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ g- N( W3 R4 [2 `. D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 d- q) l1 a, A0 @7 S5 x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ D! G( Z2 u" _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' s" G- }& c9 c8 A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. A5 x8 Y$ i4 ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- c- U" @+ n6 X+ h$ F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 n: n. E# |; J- u* t  X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ L" U  x$ U/ F; i) |; I我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 `: A; m& _3 {1 V/ K; X$ Y$ w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>