【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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4 B! C: L5 M+ n, s' {1 @! Q8 |/ p我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
7 S8 I9 u+ T) h! _( Z( I6 }I already loved you with all my heart
- k7 N% V. K! N4 C8 i6 jWe meet and talk everyday,
4 F% a5 [- |8 g0 w( N  J/ E$ ^But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( \6 D, M7 I" c8 u) W: L4 X: _: J4 R* {I would probably know how you feel
9 |. ^* T8 M: _" U- k/ |Love… just the word love
: @; S; z) M4 u) _: o8 m9 ^Why is it so difficult to express?
! L. O6 _) t4 c# M6 c  D7 CI want to confess that I love you,
1 `% q& i2 X) e% j& }$ GBut I never did
8 O3 l. ^; C1 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% n) Z5 p7 n* m5 E! ^If today isn’t too late,
  |2 b) W0 N4 h; _' K8 e0 n7 sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ ], E. L' T. A- j+ k6 J# MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 [# g3 Q$ {; k2 S6 FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 ?6 M; D4 |  W' G- _4 q- wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; }; s6 [) J+ Z1 e3 h9 E, O- ]I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 a4 b" O* B* v) V' B. O- G* k3 ZCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- [% W! N/ a% r- \! |Can I entrust it to you?
( Y' l* l+ R2 V( X" x0 ZEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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( N$ n; \5 Z6 E* Y/ I( O+ {<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) h5 k$ V% m0 n$ u<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 U" I, m& l% L9 G2 b3 i: C<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! J# e# F/ d* k; ^( a<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 L. V7 m3 H, J3 @<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 L  n, \% o. o<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ u! m+ n  B  Y7 |6 W<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* V; d7 ^) z6 |4 w<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% v; i2 r; k; t/ {<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 K2 [5 O% {6 K; @: L3 O<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' d. k5 v+ m  i1 N* S% w<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, Q/ I/ G* q# z$ q9 ~<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' ~1 \0 Y/ z. Y+ V<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ z. d2 m% t4 r3 K/ h<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 N& K. _5 `6 t0 w( N- j<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
4 o, q3 M* _# g9 l8 X<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! X3 H3 v, Z! E) {" @$ C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& Z% y) @$ S  a( z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 }, y  h6 j4 P) k# h+ }2 x2 t0 n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, W  D. L* R9 W' t/ y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 ]0 G  _+ O7 F; c<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 ~; j; n! S5 M* ^<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, j$ Q, T% c/ Y4 o4 H1 |$ G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* P' F' f1 H* Y7 h: N<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 d8 H( P6 P$ d; d, B5 N<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; S  i6 t  x( z3 t+ G& V4 V6 b! F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 M/ J2 P$ q2 d" l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ I) X5 @8 e3 n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: j: N! L5 R6 L5 p# o8 B& v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% J( `2 N/ `+ h& @( t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 x4 H+ h2 B5 \( m<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* O. B( u7 m0 l# V# d1 W& z9 I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" i! N3 N5 K* A. d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 ?4 y' d# e; o# h  K" C% ]) l<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
) W. z) }$ i/ p7 y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

  y" u+ p5 w+ A* ]3 ^: c* H这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) a& T8 n( \+ t4 `8 g<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 D/ C: X2 [. l4 g8 O# P<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>