【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
; ?$ ?8 [) U/ wThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: x8 p7 m' ?; G4 c- b* P* vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 v* v# ]5 M( W+ B# p* F$ R' j6 qFrom the first moment we met,
2 ]5 u; ]& `& k5 f" wI already loved you with all my heart
  j8 I! x$ F9 F) I* y" a: @0 m( S+ BWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 q/ m1 Z$ `; n+ N, ^$ x& Y( N& tIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
. u$ f+ X4 a) w/ `, YLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ p: m4 P) Z* Q# |: U2 U' aBut I never did
7 |" [& w; I/ G2 g$ |, n8 b; G( F1 lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# i4 ?4 ~1 y6 j3 _; a* |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ @" y6 Q# m' g3 u- @9 H+ r1 vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  v' k1 h+ f( t6 `2 oLove… just the word love
8 Y$ C2 b. s( J1 o) hWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ z2 Z; Z( M: H8 D. N9 u" YBut I never did
+ b! D, r, j5 V* @4 D% s. lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- x2 p; c: ^3 T8 l* B# _' o. S- f4 BIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 q* h' \6 f! MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. n8 d7 Q& E7 N6 l0 A( ^: O5 }; RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, K+ _3 H  k6 ]  p" t0 rCan I entrust it to you?
, a6 Y! l( q1 s# M' g! cEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, G" G1 y% s9 _$ t/ I2 z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) y& t5 o: B: @<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 h2 F% V/ h; B9 `$ {: }6 J7 F7 g5 f<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- E- M; R: W* E  f  k) c0 U<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, p: _$ n+ J' J, p+ ?<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& Q/ V5 j& ~6 B( Z<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 _5 p" F8 M! z! H7 ~% x<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 ^' A3 z3 k# g1 g<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 K1 n# h$ |7 M! E# W7 g* S<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 f7 ]% X, c/ G4 X<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" @0 J( m4 w7 {" O9 B9 b, s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 ?  p  d: p# F5 Q4 O% ?, R<P>但我不会</P>
* r3 ?6 ], e; x8 |/ C% ^, l" P6 g<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' M; x8 ]/ d8 A# ~<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 H6 q2 [2 w7 O& p' b8 o$ ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, Y" Z4 @6 c) ?  g. m& i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 |# p9 B- v$ P; h* E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( ?3 D* y* U- H<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 r& c  A8 q" ?5 L. O0 R3 A9 c3 K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" R- }, Y5 i  _, t0 t, k  U* v) d( X8 |<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
  m! S6 Z, j, X. D: e# j0 F<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( L' V; _/ ^9 l; v& l<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" ]+ g2 x. z7 D4 N7 @9 Y" x; U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ \2 j- Q* T7 R. w* T0 A  T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 `2 ^; a9 v# e8 g6 D  |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- e% a* z: b& f0 X! g3 G$ U) D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. _" h/ q7 ^0 \5 J9 ~" t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# T3 R) ^, K: U( ?<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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$ m. [! `$ ~  e4 n- ]2 ^2 |这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>