【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; q0 k4 X! J( e+ N# E5 X3 h% RFrom the first moment we met,
7 T5 x& p6 @1 J2 M' eI already loved you with all my heart
4 Y  t, l" p- O( R5 r4 cWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
, y3 _3 g) m; MLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ I4 m" u4 M( d+ tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 o  z2 [! {5 q. Y0 I) D. y+ uIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' e; M2 e  _+ e* b9 oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
5 C0 r2 u) D& A% JWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
% b* c3 x$ |) r4 ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 M, b; P- q2 U. ~' r$ LEntrust my love within your heart
/ q; ?6 W6 x- e, a2 L) @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 F' L: G0 n3 {8 I9 V6 s2 ?<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* z, J: }9 J+ M- \3 X8 c; M<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% {7 O" U  {& `2 j! g<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) ~& W) B, X; u# n- l0 l7 j<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( J2 M2 y+ g0 B5 m# j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! h3 c" U, L* A. b3 q$ m5 ^* m<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 B7 c0 ^' I  l$ [- w8 j6 p<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 B( z( I9 o& s9 {5 q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 F! g! X6 g6 ]" W0 Y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 t* s3 @+ L  q! f<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ T6 c, |& P3 K+ Y( ^# H$ P<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( i% Q1 D  p  i+ n- Z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 Q% _* F9 `; S, l% ^2 U1 V" e' v<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
6 T! N  |' ^- T<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
% N: d$ |2 q/ W) R3 s- j5 V<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 A2 V3 L- n2 m* h9 W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 \! \- F9 d. \" M8 k* }% V' r! [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* P0 B' J* O; m) F+ Y8 x% r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 p( |2 k8 F& o0 ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  M; I8 l/ R& I5 Q<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 A- Q5 O1 Z" F, T9 }<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( X, J  M  I  `* D1 J<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ g2 e5 F: i; d; |4 C6 K, H% R: p<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 b8 p. U( T  f+ V: Y7 B- w<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
6 h4 {) q; V9 }9 M# l# D5 {<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' [- y: I; W9 v6 s! |8 A2 s5 i" k4 x) l<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 c% `8 C# ], s( w4 ]! Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" ^* w/ J% g3 ?<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: q# O1 t& u9 }/ J  x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! T: N# ]8 U4 H- Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 {  ?3 Y8 a+ j/ n; \0 }5 d# P! o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ G; b/ L& W1 w' s: s: Z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 |, T/ k8 a+ c4 }/ p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, ?, y2 r$ V$ l" G! C. p9 y2 A<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
! ^, @& x8 q# m. A) I6 p<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

: x) y& m7 O& d! V这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 l5 L1 v) e" w7 Q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& T  Y$ G$ h+ Z/ m8 B. Y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ M3 w, `/ F* E8 [$ n' K<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>