【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
8 f4 e" f6 S9 Q' @* \6 cThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ _2 Y  I- R% ]" Z! r9 X9 S' mFrom the first moment we met,
! x1 ]+ Y! Y0 S( v" `# H+ NI already loved you with all my heart
1 ]9 E1 U  Y- EWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* F# {7 N2 W/ u9 C/ g5 }/ ^. s' g' hI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 |# v- k3 g: |0 K* O5 I/ S5 DI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. @! }: q1 |5 i* [Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) a8 S& x& k" S+ V' m5 ?I want to confess that I love you,
2 ^! ]7 W8 g9 G6 F/ oBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: r- }2 G; b) K' P4 UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ V7 H, _4 c6 D) x' a& G& O4 I<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( T. N' G  u* ]2 Q' D<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 k2 B0 P( ~  X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( M% G9 F, |/ z1 J<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. p& a1 ~: H( R: D<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 Y$ h! e0 S% q4 b<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. Y; `& o: `; O' Q( u( K& V<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. @( }: u2 d) N' K( ~& Z1 ]" Y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( B" d) w$ K8 z5 G6 a8 G# @5 A$ E<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 V' ]- k: F3 B( F$ O* y; }<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% t7 z$ N, @, z& O& J4 X" M% J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 [2 v3 N4 C1 @5 Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! m7 N7 G9 ]+ Q/ W( l, ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ F3 y0 l0 y# t0 ]  y* C8 B: ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; l( T+ G) l! o8 l2 ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 p' G  ]) X) u6 \6 E  w! j. _  h<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: C6 F; y' J" ~  A<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 v; U% d" L% J& ]2 Z4 V2 S<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) a8 ?7 }/ O- ]* `0 w<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 _8 i4 J' j" N<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 b! ?" ^. v6 B+ @$ `<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( n4 Y' W( S1 J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 @0 j/ F$ F5 k1 l$ `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 b' K3 J0 _4 E' i9 P9 `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ ?1 h. P2 a. W0 e3 l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! D, T) c0 P" B% Z4 m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ {7 i' B  K1 T* N5 d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. ?5 c) O/ R9 N: j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

  s' b: g$ |% q0 v( J; | 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
) M. R+ m  D1 x7 R% S
" R% [$ d% v6 o; G2 ]. ^, [这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# Q3 S" g2 E- R( g# u
这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>