【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
# g1 X( m4 M0 r7 @9 LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ ]% A' O  P' i, W8 f3 ?From the first moment we met,
( {: E3 N& U, j+ s0 ~8 EI already loved you with all my heart
) s3 P4 u' Z/ Y- UWe meet and talk everyday,
; I$ X9 W! \" c1 BBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" {/ L+ N) {# W  I! _5 NIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( m% p7 z1 f+ h2 _Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! }( g7 p. C6 i) w% I( vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 |0 r2 @9 m" X$ v& K5 ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 ], C0 R  J8 C5 f, dI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 D! `4 I' ^3 PCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( _& `/ t: E+ h: PLove… just the word love
7 K$ _' L: H6 \2 Q4 S' GWhy is it so difficult to express?
6 z  F' M( a% zI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( v4 Q( {2 |0 O: m" z; K% B- qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 G* f0 h1 e# W& u7 @! @If today isn’t too late,
3 r/ m9 b9 M% x3 t* cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# G1 p, \9 a6 S) `& ?0 _* k3 uEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

$ t2 d3 E; @. e6 J! z  Z$ ^9 L<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. n4 f: {( Z- W1 v<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 R' c( Q9 I( x4 I3 u) l  q% H<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* O0 V% r  E$ N6 |<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) ], j% f' w/ i0 [; F7 ], E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; @/ {1 y& k$ C7 `" ]<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) H% ]9 {: F) a* \* j5 v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! j5 d/ {( x- x( t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' r2 t/ @4 K# S<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% Q. Y: F1 l6 T: d<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 |3 X; v. T4 I) C3 q7 c<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% p+ Q3 b5 a3 Z3 g! J( W) R+ j$ M8 U; Y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- J, ^" L5 _4 \! z) T<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 P; ?5 ?- s! l9 y, n8 K& J& p: a<P>但我不会</P>
: I8 `7 h  g& l<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 D- B' x' w1 k& m5 z; K<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  v$ L4 v; g7 _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) [9 }/ P1 b$ e! D% E5 ^8 d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; w6 ^; ^) `; E  W0 J2 o<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ U" W$ p3 ~& b" V2 o2 L- H4 V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& _* |9 ~8 L( R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& }+ `$ _. p0 z( M; ]2 I( q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& e4 E- [1 t( T<P>Love… just the word love </P>
1 Z3 f2 l8 l; @2 L) m# I- m<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; I, L" {2 ]* h  H+ I6 Z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 N0 S; O! J0 r! r+ Z/ `: n3 s<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
  H5 `) @2 A* U3 Q8 ]/ x<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 O; G/ m) o6 U0 B0 T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 ]* C; l* P$ P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. E) u, h1 F( D<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, ]2 l9 E& d% q. k  H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ g! }# c8 b$ u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% `2 G7 d: Q5 i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- V  ]+ _6 |7 B: @" x<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 V, M/ l1 l6 w7 q& j: B, \9 M 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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+ P% e0 B, U! a这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* ]" Y$ S4 }" r6 D<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 ]3 F, W' V# s3 S' G<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>