【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 J# W( d0 j$ N4 JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: P1 P4 S: B4 c8 G5 X* |! FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- l3 A0 J$ z( c* ~* kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ J, K$ F# f2 tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 s: E6 w& L, r* f. WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  ]5 W* }, c/ {" EI love you I love you with all my heart
9 U* n6 B7 A$ G' }Nothing can compare to my love
+ j$ x- Z, l$ B0 E! jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# `) Y: `# i3 @/ TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 \; O& D" W  \0 V# eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% K, O  U" s# a3 _/ MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. o& d' o+ e8 _: @6 ]9 \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 l7 u- |# [2 t, x! X6 e, z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ ^+ v0 w) w3 M  S+ g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, s$ F- o2 t8 e7 x, ]! @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; _4 K* t! z) w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ c: Q; `; J/ W' d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 }6 ~* z4 t4 f2 f- b& N5 W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% b% y6 C: e/ |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& q- T4 n! m. u1 K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ t( j/ o$ R9 R9 e9 Z5 U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 \+ S* [$ t; d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 Q" y$ M! {3 a# w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 p& A( f5 H# G' k- S$ C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* {+ }" s! ]+ A2 M) m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! c9 X/ B, j9 q& y/ \6 ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& t  Q9 S: |+ A4 ]) z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ V- M6 d; Q: U# }9 R( d  d% ^# w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 X7 R% P- m/ \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; C& n. }% V# E+ H, G# l+ a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ K; D$ G/ ^( ?% u+ Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; e9 n  K8 p0 ~, ?- }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 U* Y7 {% {8 x! M<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 {3 F$ ]. q/ N+ S: h/ }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' p  [' X. k) _* M0 G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* m& ~! @; l; U. a# ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: ~( r' s5 k7 s! u2 R+ _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: G+ m8 f; c& t  G8 w- D$ b1 L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% h8 G6 r9 j6 Y8 R0 O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>