【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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& Z$ m2 {3 D- E0 D- YThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; T8 {7 O4 d- H# L& ]That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* Z/ @4 l# X/ L  [5 eFrom the first moment we met,
/ f4 ^$ K8 N. UI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
! T+ @) }' s0 Y4 V( k0 bLove… just the word love
5 G, G# s2 c# |9 x" f- _5 @Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 c0 k+ \4 C5 h1 Y# l' O) y+ {6 ABut I never did
  z! Q; U7 {/ J& @5 p6 X; h9 t- bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 Z; {- j' \0 Z& QIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( `, o% J, O4 RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! L4 n$ @+ D/ \5 ^8 [1 M2 f/ C. vCan I entrust it to you?
% Y6 [) x- y8 Y1 o% d" UEntrust my love within your heart
: W& L& D0 _# N) BLove… just the word love
" J  v5 v( \/ J5 A1 UWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 G+ u! ^) J  @5 d+ m2 [" j. {I want to confess that I love you,
9 B, V( i* Q8 PBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
. s# M- O8 @% j- H" d" y) JEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

" T& M0 x8 v7 H) S8 o- y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 G' A' Q$ ]) U4 B+ }& W8 c0 {" x<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! s: Z) T" G+ Y, U  l( C! n% u<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 E( }; A9 v' R; \6 m* U( w' U<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ m! e' A" \) J, H. s% {<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 g3 ?/ x9 a+ q  j0 O<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. |; e! O9 `, a" {<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. h) ~8 j  d( W. E<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 Z. V4 u6 M, k$ `<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! i! C, p8 h) u! M<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 w; y# D. c: g& y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 `% u6 P/ T# I3 J* H/ l+ B, x<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. E3 W( W  @% W0 Q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ X& u' S9 s2 g8 L; b! i<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- R# w+ S0 C. ]# z- N3 Z, }) g/ z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" n7 e, j* o; O8 Q$ o3 s- [<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* q" g! m9 j; F* F1 E) }7 ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 u3 U, A/ c! g+ ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 {9 Q7 q6 a# V: f+ H! g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 A! t- g+ ?$ z0 P. j' ~: V+ {! y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 R6 H! Q1 t9 Z9 h<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 V! }5 t! T% m+ \7 \% D* ], x<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ m1 A4 H% [: s1 L; J7 b' ^; r<P>But I never did </P>
8 z5 k7 b8 `3 W) q! C% G<P>但我不会 </P>
" r0 Z/ n: K3 b, ?6 h) }<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& R" n0 A- P6 p6 Y) C0 q  C* ~<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 S; O, l& j8 M* q' P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" S' Q4 w9 q' b7 \0 p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& F! c6 Z6 ]5 S' B8 t$ S3 P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 u) m, C; C1 S& s% Q1 Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! W+ Q( Z- H  Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 N; o+ s& T9 [, d<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ X1 N$ P. `, k9 H. ^2 d4 b4 p+ ~ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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4 E) `0 G. b/ R( ]  c/ q, T* X0 X这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 k) Y% u( a) q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 [" ^& v& G6 y6 c; R. I$ ~" O<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>