【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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0 R8 a: P$ C/ M+ u' Z我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 g/ P. v# s* d1 ^" `2 |+ i% d: aThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 a# ]7 i# u" X7 E6 O  P6 u5 OFrom the first moment we met,
7 [1 L0 |+ L  Y: p* Z; k  hI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
# m9 ^5 B4 P" FBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
$ p7 b- e4 Q" a4 uWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 ~. N0 h, {9 L* T/ n8 o4 j" pBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ }3 M8 b: k" q& D3 l) NIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 G4 ?- v6 P4 r% `! S9 xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 o; o7 h7 I; P! r7 @1 tCan I entrust it to you?
" p# \7 D7 l1 L5 i! V2 o8 n9 uEntrust my love within your heart
7 @% r3 D6 V4 g; ~- K7 k# s# bLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# q% E- O1 ^5 K  x" B. D) F# p  OIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% o, m. R! U0 k! `/ qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 W& p# _$ R" O' O% ~Can I entrust it to you?
$ ~  u# m! g5 _8 OEntrust my love within your heart
/ T: O* p6 I1 i5 X5 KCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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0 h, g1 t: A  m0 y4 F<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 e: R4 ?: G* [/ M" j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 R# @! l2 _9 V<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& [: u2 l! ^  v: R3 E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 N, c& Z6 O$ _( _" V. u3 T0 F: E<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 X) d# w1 |! I<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 O0 B9 s) J6 {( m+ X( T; ~3 s# t<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
) K' |7 W! y2 z2 s- R% G: _1 N- M<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ f% w8 y/ \' T<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& R0 k- y: S4 X" J<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ t% r1 p5 h. g5 T0 C<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 D. J9 d* v) j& ]8 N5 N( e<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ X2 U+ Z/ ~- C  y# G8 o+ _  U<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  V5 c8 i8 l. R) {<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. ], ^& O8 B! M+ u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  L+ S( R7 J( D& z3 i/ P2 Z+ w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& c. E/ e1 b$ C; j& L$ [/ v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 P$ s* p+ D( C% |  Q5 @& j8 `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 c5 J, {- T$ [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 c! _. c3 ?8 x- B4 s" r2 I7 |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  R4 L+ v% K5 q7 U$ ~* J2 v7 q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. b- K% O1 H. y/ @; a<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! N* Q! h8 J- Y- u<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
0 c$ `$ ]+ p& V! c<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, o9 a7 w5 U$ ]2 m, r& k9 Z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 t: s3 Z7 Y( y! F; b9 ?<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 `* V3 o  |, t4 F5 }+ j0 S0 D<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 |; T7 w0 R2 N/ Z3 J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, W+ O4 ?! B" I* x# K$ L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' ^% }; m3 M+ L4 s- ?$ `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ u* _5 h9 C5 R2 B7 H5 e6 B<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 K+ _7 d& L  A0 v/ [! b% d<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 m5 ]3 U# s$ ?, c8 B5 F 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( P8 ^. o3 F1 c这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; ^% W" Z$ B4 P* i<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>