【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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- b+ H. \) u+ U我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ ]  ?0 g2 _, V$ Z( X8 w. s2 w0 aThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- A' a* h- `, a: L# SFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
) |% l1 ], `1 v5 T7 ]- n! hWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 k2 l; a( V7 a8 t5 c6 G+ E$ aIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" [' N+ S, G& hI would probably know how you feel
- g* _& ^6 n9 ~, d9 ZLove… just the word love
, G: Y4 m# M9 F! ^5 L3 Q7 K& {* e- XWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& J" V* P$ \3 h* i' w, G" w2 AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 d6 T7 o! a1 R, _+ u' }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* ?4 {8 y/ R8 @" D& J; @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* n$ q, y) {! D# ]1 zEntrust my love within your heart
6 O; ?) I2 u' x! G  sLove… just the word love
) q9 i- L4 f: P6 p. W* OWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 b$ o5 J" m' nI want to confess that I love you,
) W9 N% a; m! S, C% sBut I never did
2 \- o/ ?, a+ x  d- fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 X2 ^/ w5 e# q$ _" {" DEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

, G2 K! H+ M: U$ U: p4 C<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! ~: N0 z9 r. |; u4 A  L<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
+ ^, z+ Z1 K& j' D! ?. Y<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. S3 b% E2 [1 c) D* T<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 Y" c; K: Z) v2 ~, a# T<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" y' c% ~6 `/ F9 i6 Q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 A+ c: `: \9 L" B& J+ Q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 Y' v4 Y5 t1 u3 g<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% g# ^6 ^" c3 d+ x( J<P>但我不会</P>
  h  G% d9 H0 U$ x( q6 b8 A<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 n1 x7 C- B3 ~% L, ]$ S5 J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 V1 `4 j: @- I4 j. ?6 X<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! d* k8 f" {! \9 `7 m& \<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ Q* x0 M% `% X( K<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 R4 h. h/ P+ w( h9 Q7 f<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 W" S% Z% A# c4 M4 ~: T1 G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. V/ |6 c9 u% s6 _3 I; R: c<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 o3 S# s5 {7 ?; y<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 X7 a, _5 n' W$ U/ e* |<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
* S1 _* {; f& Z3 u' C: k& a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# ?6 K* W; {; T7 ]- c6 r# U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 [8 n3 h8 p  t- ~, G4 R' N, Z# N' h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 n& `) {9 L( ?% G) a6 w4 Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 F; Q8 P4 X  |这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>